Me again! Desperate again! First screens for my new game!! What do you think?

cbt

Hi guys,

Been here for a long time. Produced 5 other "apps" until now. None of them were games. It was specifically for my country and was simple apps. I've never worked longer than 20hours for any of them. But, I've made a "quiz" type game and released it 2days ago. I took me few days, maybe a total of 100hours.. But it just sold 2 copies first day, I'm waiting for the next...

My other apps sold 150copies total, in 5 weeks. As you see none of them were success. But I never really cared until yesterday because I never put any hard work on any of them. But yesterday my "100hour app" did not even sold as many as 5hour app.

So I was preparing this new game for a long long time... Today I lost my all enthusiasm but I've come so far. I can't stop now. BUT. Let me make it clear. If this game won't be a success, I will make just 1 more app to see if it will get any better. If not, I'm out. No.. I'm totally out.. It's not worth all my hours and back pains and neck pains and all other pains.. (I admit that working on an app is so much fun, but when you are enthusiastic about your new app. )

Sorry for being pain in the ass... Long story short here is my game..







It will have 50 levels. Something like a "BOSS" level on every 10th level.
You can purchase 8 different upgrades. 5 of them are useable items.. (Like Laser)
It will have an interesting story to make the game more eye catching.

And the video, which makes more sense..

Sorry for the big white thing on the upper left corner. It is an ongoing project



What do you think??

chosenonestudios

Looks cool, not sure whats going on though, maybe a video?

cbt

chosenonestudios said:
Looks cool, not sure whats going on though, maybe a video?

Yeah, video is more logical

chosenonestudios

Sweet, what's with the white box around the score? I'd turn the alpha to 0

cbt

chosenonestudios said:
Sweet, what's with the white box around the score? I'd turn the alpha to 0

Which one are you talking about? If you are saying the upper left corner while in a level, it wont even be there.. Just for testing..

BeyondtheTech

FYI, it's "You Lose!" not "You Loose!" Looks nice, though. Keep up the good work.

cbt

BeyondtheTech said:
FYI, it's "You Lose!" not "You Loose!" Looks nice, though. Keep up the good work.

Thanks!! Will take care of that asap.

cbt

Anyone?

FanStudioUK

I really can't tell what's going on there or what you have to do....

cbt

Well... You have to dodge the coming enemies for the given time. If you tuch the ground yo lose. If you touch the big grey thing, you lose. You have lasers, shields, ability to turn invisible etc. to destroy them or escape from them. Enemies are always coming horizontal, downwards. Every enemy you hit, decreases your money according to your level. Every one you kill gives you money.

You have an upgrade to make the enemies push you less. You have an upgrade to make the big gray thing come slower. You have lasers, time machines. You have an upgrade to slow the enemy spawning speed...

Thats the main details of the game..

cbt

Come on guys, I need feedback..

PixelRyan

There's a lot of info at the beginning maybe Start could just jump you right into the first level.

VoidedSky

Looks neat!