Help menu

IsabelleKIsabelleK Member, Sous Chef Posts: 2,807
edited November -1 in Miscellaneous
Hello,
Could you please help me with my instructions menu? I would like to be sure that all texts are correct and understood.

Virtual analog stick: Touch and slide to look around.
Options: Touch any slot to save, touch twice Menu button for Main Menu.
Scroll: Touch for character dossiers. Touch for the next screen (when active).
Inventory: Touch for inventory. Touch on the item to choose it. Touch on any object on the screen to use the item with.
Screen: Touch for descriptions, actions and dialogues.
Go Back button: Touch to go backwards (if available).

I'd like them to be english correct, understood and descriptive, but short and professional. There will be screenshots for every help screen.

Thank you very much for your help!

Comments

  • mynameisacemynameisace Hull, UKMember Posts: 2,484
    You're pretty much there, What are you trying to say with the dossiers part? That's not really a word that's used.

    Is this all just going to be listed on the help screen?

    Ace
  • IsabelleKIsabelleK Member, Sous Chef Posts: 2,807
    Thanks for your reply Ace!
    I want to make several screens (one for virtual analog stick, one for inventory etc.). There will be a screenshot from the game as a background on every image (black and white with only one thing coloured - F.E. virtual analog stick or inventory).
    mynameisace said:
    You're pretty much there, What are you trying to say with the dossiers part? That's not really a word that's used.

    I have a scroll button which opens descriptions of main characters from the game:
    image
  • mynameisacemynameisace Hull, UKMember Posts: 2,484
    Analog stick: Touch and slide to look around.
    Options: Touch any slot to save, touch the Menu button twice for the Main Menu.
    Scroll: Touch for character dossiers. Touch for the next screen (when active).
    Inventory: Touch for inventory. Touch an item to select it. Touch any object on the screen to use the selected item with.
    Screen: Touch for descriptions, actions and dialogues.
    Go Back: Touch to go back (if available).

    Just cleared up a little of your sentence structures but your English is great.

    Ace
  • IsabelleKIsabelleK Member, Sous Chef Posts: 2,807
    Thanks a lot Ace! If you give me your e-mail, I'll send you a promo!
  • mynameisacemynameisace Hull, UKMember Posts: 2,484
    Awesome, it's info@instantmashgames.com

    Ace
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