English text help

IsabelleKIsabelleK Member, Sous Chef Posts: 2,807
edited November -1 in Miscellaneous
Hello,
I need help with a text, that I want to put in the game. It has to be a request / encouragement for player/customer to write a review on AppStore.
Something like: Please write a review on AppStore if you enjoy our game.

Could you give me a hand and help with writing that?

Thank you!

Comments

  • m456arcusm456arcus Member Posts: 189
    The easiest way I could think of is a pause screen. If you make a scene with your message in it, you could easily call it up whenever you'd like.
    Edit: Wait, just realized that might not be what you mean. Do you want the actual message?
  • IsabelleKIsabelleK Member, Sous Chef Posts: 2,807
    m456arcus said:
    The easiest way I could think of is a pause screen. If you make a scene with your message in it, you could easily call it up whenever you'd like.
    Edit: Wait, just realized that might not be what you mean. Do you want the actual message?

    Yes, that's right :) I want to put it at the end of game, and I need a text :)
  • m456arcusm456arcus Member Posts: 189
    Oh, I see. Well in that case, I'm not very good at writing, but I'd do something simple like, 'Rate our app if you enjoyed playing!'
  • IsabelleKIsabelleK Member, Sous Chef Posts: 2,807
    Anyone has other ideas? :)

    Thank you!
  • calvin9403calvin9403 Member Posts: 3,186
    you can search some good apps on the app store and see what they write!
  • IsabelleKIsabelleK Member, Sous Chef Posts: 2,807
    calvin9403 said:
    you can search some good apps on the app store and see what they write!

    Right, but I have almost 20 GB of iPhone/iPad/Universal apps, and I don't remember if or where is this kind of text :)
    Do you know any titles?
  • calvin9403calvin9403 Member Posts: 3,186
    not that I can think of
    maybe search at google
  • IsabelleKIsabelleK Member, Sous Chef Posts: 2,807
    Could you please tell me, if this sentence is correct?

    "If you like the game support us by voting/reviewing in AppStore!"

    Thank you!
  • IsabelleKIsabelleK Member, Sous Chef Posts: 2,807
    Bump :)
  • Rob2Rob2 Member Posts: 2,402
    "If you like the game support us by voting/reviewing in the AppStore!"

    (just added THE)

    "If you enjoyed playing this game please support us by voting/reviewing in the AppStore!"

    "If you enjoyed playing this game a vote or review would be much appreciated!"

    "Enjoyed this game ? Please consider a vote or review !"

    Using / isn't the best way of forming a sentence but is probably acceptable in areas where space is at a premium and is less clumsy than "and or".
  • IsabelleKIsabelleK Member, Sous Chef Posts: 2,807
    Thank you Rob!
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