Save Patchland update! (possible screens for app store... need feedback)

goliath

Hello everyone. About a week ago I posted a topic on the forums outlining my new game called Save Patchland and I thought I'd give you guys a quick update. I am almost finished and development is coming along really well. Below are the screens that I am thinking about submitting to the app store and I just wanted some feedback on them.

I also (fingers crossed) included a video below just in case you missed my previous post. I plan on making a more "official trailer" for the game but this should give you a quick look on the title. I also have updated the graphics since the video so I will be sure to do another one soon. Thanks and please let me know what you think.







http://www.youtube.com/user/gameonnintendo#p/a/u/0/h6lOHrDWsZw

goliath

sorry that the youtube embed didn't work....

Oaklandasfan

you can't embed videos from ur channel. This game strangely reminds me of Kirby's epic yarn...

Oaklandasfan

change the falling things from stars to something else. Does it get harder as you go along? Also, add some new powerups
(so you are a little different than TSB's template)
Just some advice.

magic101hi

Fixed Video link



-Josh

magic101hi

Also having the audio on a loop like that would piss me off if I bought that game plus I can tell that all the sounds are from GarageBand.

Sorry if I am harsh (Just got off a 17 Hour plane ride) but think of it as constructive criticism.

-Josh

goliath

Thanks guys for the feedback I appreciate it.

I was going for an epic yarn feel as I love that game. It may have an influence on my next title as well but we will see.

goliath

bump

Just wanted to see if anyone else wanted to give some input. This is the last time i'll do this=)

Thanks for the above input as well guys!