I made a trailer, what do guys think about it?

HasifUzirHasifUzir Member Posts: 41
edited November -1 in Miscellaneous
Here's a trailer I did for Air Penguin. I had about 4 days to make it.



I'd like to know any constructive criticism. :) . Any way to improve? Would be helpful in making my first app's trailer.

Thanks,

Comments

  • azavegaazavega Member Posts: 362
    Dawn!!! thats pretty insane, lol I really like it... Good luck with sales...
  • POMPOM Member Posts: 2,599
    HA HA that was awesome !!!!
    What program do you use for this?

    Roy.
  • goliathgoliath Member Posts: 1,440
    I honestly love it. I smiled the whole time and I think it was done near perfect... GREAT JOB.
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  • ZackGSZackGS Member Posts: 313
    Loved it, very unique :)
  • TheGamerTheGamer Member Posts: 94
    Very cool, well done!
  • HasifUzirHasifUzir Member Posts: 41
    Thanks for the positive comments :)

    @p-o-m : I use Photoshop for the art and Sony Vegas for the video editing. Also Audacity for audio noise removal.
  • DizkoDizko Member Posts: 498
    I laughed a lot at the "100 levels, not enough ENCORE!"
  • StormyStudioStormyStudio United KingdomMember Posts: 3,989
    I really like the bits of animation.. and the crudely painted/drawn bits of imagery. Nice simple low frame rate style.

    Constructive criticism.
    Think the text could look better (more in keeping with the style)...maybe a more pixely/crude font would tie it all together better. And place with a bit more thought.

    e.g.
    http://www.dafont.com/joystix.font
  • HasifUzirHasifUzir Member Posts: 41
    @stormystudio : Yeah, that's basically my "style" (if you can call it one xD )

    Ok, I'll keep that in mind. I'll try a couple of other fonts.

    Thanks,
  • iTouchGameriTouchGamer Member Posts: 681
    Whos voice is that? lol
  • RedlerTechRedlerTech Member Posts: 1,583
    wow how much do you charge?!

    Matt
  • JPickardJPickard Member Posts: 477
    That was pretty great!
  • BramHoddssdBramHoddssd Member Posts: 414
    epic
  • HasifUzirHasifUzir Member Posts: 41
    @iTouchGamer : Heh, that would be my voice :)

    @NextGenEntertainment : Are you interested? Email me at drhasif@yahoo.com

    Thanks,
  • ozboybrianozboybrian PRO Posts: 2,102
    Impressed!
    Was Clever and original and put together very well.

    Only thing would be the doodle Art unless that's what you where going for xD
    Great stuff.
  • FjantIncFjantInc Member Posts: 115
    To be honest I think it could use some work. The idea and speech is fun, but there are some timing issues and of course the mix of graphical design. I'd either go all the way with paintbrushy graphics (even the penguins) or (preferably) better graphics, so everything else matches the penguins. Personally that's the approach I'd take, as the paintbrushy graphics just seems really amateurish.

    I'd work some with the texts aswell. It seems you're after some sort of motion graphic-ish feel. Try a different font, mix up the sizes, try bold and italic sometimes etc.
  • cyplaycyplay Member Posts: 35
    Clever... I love it... but the text should match the art style! Just a thought.
  • HasifUzirHasifUzir Member Posts: 41
    Okay, noted :)
    Yes, text is quite an issue. Will definitely do something about it.

    Thanks,
  • LumpAppsLumpApps Member Posts: 2,881
    Great! Love the sidewalk joke.

    My 2 cents:
    - ad a background music through the whole video. Its kinda silent this way.
    - use different fonts as mentioned before. (The handwritten doodle font is cool!)
    - Exaggerate your accent, it is funny! It could be an 'South-Polian' accent ;)

    Do not change the doodle graphics. The contrast between the game art and 'presenter' art are a plus!

    Lump Apps and My Assets

  • mangaroomangaroo Member Posts: 419
    i love the reference (if im not mistaken*) for this trailer (OK, have a nap, THEN FIRE THE MISSILES!)

    you should try some filters on the voice track to remove the slight echo and small room sound..

    instead of the overlapping text effect put some gameplay video clips in while your talking adjectives imo

    looking good, good luck!

    *[Some NSFW sound - which must be on for this]
  • HasifUzirHasifUzir Member Posts: 41
    Lol sorry, didn't put out any references in my vid xD

    Thanks,
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