My First App Chalk 'n Ball (IT'S FREE!!)

youngster9

Hey you guys. I just released my first app. It is called Chalk 'n Ball. It is a fun physics puzzle game. I have put it for free so please check it out. Also leave comments here or make a review. Thanks a lot if you get it. I really want to get as many downloads as possible. I am 13 so don't expect an incredible game. Also the seller will say Dijo Alexander that is not me that is my dad. So don't start calling me Dijo. Here is the link please check it out

http://itunes.apple.com/us/app/chalk-n-ball/id439131432?mt=8

Thanks,
Youngster9

youngster9

Forgot to put more choices in the poll just tell me good or bad.

dmilinovichiii

I'm sorry but my honest reaction is that the icon is really bad. When I looked through the game, the game looked really great but most people will take one look at the icon and skip over it.

youngster9

Could you tell me somthing I could do to make the icon better. I did not spend too much time on it so I probably could make some improvements. Thanks for the advice Mr.Rinoy.

JamieOneil

youngster9 said:
Could you tell me somthing I could do to make the icon better. I did not spend too much time on it so I probably could make some improvements. Thanks for the advice Mr.Rinoy.

Make it a bit more interesting. different background.
Or you could pay someone to do it for you, it would only cost about £5.
Just spend i little more time on it.

JamieOneil

youngster9

Could i please have some more help. I really want to improve my games so could you please download it and give me your critique. Be as harsh as you want to be. But please don't make me cry. Thanks for all your input. Please check it out its free.

youngster9

youngster9

Come on please check it out it is free. Please

youngster9

Thanks for all the downloads on the first day. Got a lot of downloads.

creativeapps

I played it for 20 mins and its really awsome game. Ignore graphics, sounds and animation. Important is game pay and its really good. Yes if you want to increase your sale. You really need good icon and graphics. Otherwise good luck for sale and good job. I will spend time to create icon for your game free of charge if you are intrested let me know.

youngster9

creativeapps said:
I played it for 20 mins and its really awsome game. Ignore graphics, sounds and animation. Important is game pay and its really good. Yes if you want to increase your sale. You really need good icon and graphics. Otherwise good luck for sale and good job. I will spend time to create icon for your game free of charge if you are intrested let me know.

Wow thanks a lot creativeapps it is my first game so I really appreciate it. I would really love it if you could make me a new icon I would include it in my next update. email me at

youngster.youngster9 at gmail.com

youngster9

783 downloads first day. Thanks to all who downloaded.

creativeapps

Congratulations You game is in puzzle new and northworthy list in USA.

youngster9

Thanks a lot creativeapps I had not noticed that thanks for the info.
Also my app reached 1000 downloads today!

JohnPapiomitis

creativeapps said:
. Ignore graphics, sounds and animation. Important is game pay and its really good.

thats just silly to say....

you used orbz template for this?

youngster9

Thats true I used his code to draw lines but that is it. The ball looks the same but I made my own. I drew a circle and filled the middle with red. I thought the templates were used to teach us how to do specific things.

I only used one thing from that template and it is the line drawing.

I am sorry if I am not supposed to do this.

xarmian

I like it.. I started working on a similar concept the other day but I'm not sure if I'm going to pursue it yet. The mechanics are good.

DonQuantum

Good Job I just gave you 5 stars. Keep up the good work. Always give credit to "Orbz" on the app credits for the template. or anyone who helped you make this success.