My First Press Release - its short and simple but is it right?

IcedBIcedB Member, PRO Posts: 384
edited November -1 in Business and Marketing Theory
‘Wobble Bass Station’ goes straight to No. 1 in App Store New and Noteworthy.

Apple UK ranked Fresh Touch Media’s latest Dubstep App, ‘Wobble Bass Station’ the number one music app this week. The app generates wobble bass sounds that are the key stone sound of the Dubstep genre, which has recently exploded into mainstream music.

App Store customers can now create their own Dubstep with ‘Wobble Bass Station’. The application features four bass synthesizers, Dubstep drum loops and fx. It also includes a waveform visualizer that alters frequency as the pitch changes.

It is the first app of its kind that utilises multi-touch technology to generate multiple synthesizer sounds with varying pitches.

The app is priced at $0.99 and is available for download on iPhone, iPad and iPod Touch 3Gs.

App Store Link:
http://itunes.apple.com/us/app/wobble-bass-station/id454302006?mt=8

Youtube Tutorial:


Fresh Touch Media website:
www.freshtouchmedia.com
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  • IcedBIcedB Member, PRO Posts: 384
    any opinions on the press release? I'd be very grateful for any feedback :)
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  • quantumsheepquantumsheep Member Posts: 8,188
    I think it's fine, apart from the 'ranked number one on N&N'.

    That doesn't actually mean anything (it's not like it's the best *selling* music app, or the most popular, which seems to be what it's trying to suggest) and might come across as disingenuous.

    After all, a press release is designed to go out to the press - and most seasoned iOS writers will see straight through this and maybe look upon it unfavourably as if you're trying to 'con' them.

    Or they might not! What do I know, eh? ;)

    QS :D

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  • AsymptoteellAsymptoteell Member Posts: 1,362
    But... But I thought you knew everything of our time, due to your mysterious sheepy past. I'm shocked.
  • quantumsheepquantumsheep Member Posts: 8,188
    Asymptoteell said:
    But... But I thought you knew everything of our time, due to your mysterious sheepy past. I'm shocked.

    I knew you were going to say that - and it's 'Mysterious sheepy future' :)

    And if I admitted all that, it might scare people.

    QS :D

    Dr. Sam Beckett never returned home...
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  • AsymptoteellAsymptoteell Member Posts: 1,362
    Well, sheep, you're probably right. The panic that would be caused If that got out would be greater than the panic following trace Adkins release of "Honkey Tonk Badonkadonk.". Only your panic would invOlve at least 30% less grandma slapping.

    Asymptoteell

    Ps: Lord have mercy, how's she even get them britches on?!
  • IcedBIcedB Member, PRO Posts: 384
    Okay.... I see your point, the phrasing used could be a little mis-leading. Perhaps I should just say
    "made it to first place in the UK New and Noteworthy section of Music Apps" or something along those lines. Its obviously a positive point and therefore needs mentioning.

    Cheers QS. Night
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  • quantumsheepquantumsheep Member Posts: 8,188
    IcedB said:
    Okay.... I see your point, the phrasing used could be a little mis-leading. Perhaps I should just say
    "made it to first place in the UK New and Noteworthy section of Music Apps" or something along those lines. Its obviously a positive point and therefore needs mentioning.

    Cheers QS. Night

    Yep - sorry, it's probably fine, but it's a pet peave of mine! Like when people say 'No.1 on the appstore!!!' - and forget to mention they actually mean 'No.1 on the appstore in Uganda' - or something.

    Or '50 million downloads!' - when only 10 are paid...

    You get the idea...

    QS :D

    Dr. Sam Beckett never returned home...
    Twitter: https://twitter.com/Quantum_Sheep
    Web: https://quantumsheep.itch.io

  • App SurgeApp Surge Member Posts: 651
    agreed. also, your video could use some improvement. try using SimCap, its great software
  • IcedBIcedB Member, PRO Posts: 384
    Aha, simcap is ideal, i should be able to record my iPhone screen with this, will dl the trial and report back, cheers redsky!
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  • IcedBIcedB Member, PRO Posts: 384
    hmmm, trial link is down, will email them
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  • App SurgeApp Surge Member Posts: 651
    I have pro, if you want me to make it for you.
    Email me at redsky@programmer.net
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