I'm about finished with my app can you guys help though?

ashapiro914ashapiro914 Member Posts: 88
edited November -1 in Working with GS (Mac)
Hey guys I'm about done with my app and wanted to know if there are any glitches in it that I missed or if there is anyway you think I could make even better. I want to know what you honestly think and why? Here is the link http://gamesalad.com/game/37191
Thanks ashapiro914

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  • StormyStudioStormyStudio United KingdomMember Posts: 3,989
    Brilliant that you've made a game I know how much work they take.

    This is all meant in a helpful way...

    Here goes:

    Honestly what I think and why...

    - Easy is still pretty hard, maybe it could start off really really easy and get harder. Medium is impossible...and I haven't tried hard.

    - The graphics throughout are not great. The car from above looks good.

    - Which ever car you choose in the menu (for easy, medium and hard does not change the one in the game.)

    - The biggest thing that would help would be if the road was moving, as currently the game doesn't make sense.

    - There are trees coming towards you in the road...

    - The music is cool, reminds me of the classic 'outrun', it loops a lot, maybe have a different track play once you die and on the main menu.

    - Do some nice custom text using an appropriate font.

    - The store is a cool idea, needs some graphics in it, and the 'bullet' add on text goes off screen.

    I'm not sure how old, how much experience you have etc etc.... good luck in the game world.... we are all still learning...

    But honestly well done on getting a game working from start to finish..with options and a store...lots can be improved but you've also got a lot working too..
  • ashapiro914ashapiro914 Member Posts: 88
    Well first thing first i'm only 12 and also are you good at graphics because I would pay you if you could make my graphics look better. Another thing is that the lines are connected to the raod so I cant make the lines move without the road it self move. I did notice myself that it is wierd that trees are flying at you in the middle of the road, I just couldnt come up with anything else. If you had an idea for that it would be appreicated and I found myself thinking easy is extremely easy but then medium is super hard and hard is impossible! So I will take medium down a little, just to make it a bit easier. I couldn't get any good graphics made by me for the store so again if you could help I would pay you! Lastly, my email is ars914.gs@gmail.com so just if you are good at graphics or know someone that is, could you just send me an email or post it.
    Thanks ashapiro914
  • svnsvn Member Posts: 445
    You can't use age as an excuse. Robert Nay is only my age and his Bubble Ball looks and plays pretty good.
  • ashapiro914ashapiro914 Member Posts: 88
    I wasn't using my age as an excuse and did you play my game?
  • StormyStudioStormyStudio United KingdomMember Posts: 3,989
    cool...and in my least patronising voice...I wish I was doing this when I was 12.... amazing!!!

    I could maybe have retired from work by the time I'm 18.

    As for graphics, I do do graphics...but sorry to busy at the moment...

    and I'm sure you can do graphics too...you already have...but I'm sure you can improve them.

    Also the road not moving, not sure what your setup is...but ask a question on the forum on that subject and I'm sure the answer will be provided.
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