Trailer- Happy Herd: Pirate Adventure

AHBGamesAHBGames Member, PRO Posts: 121
edited November -1 in Working with GS (Mac)
Hi guys, how you doing?... i would like to show you the trailer of my game
i hope you enjoy it

:)

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  • gyroscopegyroscope I am here.Member, Sous Chef, PRO Posts: 6,598
    Hi AHBGames; looks a fun game with nice graphics; good luck with sales.

    I've one comment though about the trend of people like your good self adding music to their trailer which has nothing to do with the game itself. I don't know if this is to the detriment of the game sales or not; what I do know is that surely the majority of people make a sub-conscious (or conscious) thought that it adds an amateur aspect to the video, and therefore the game itself.

    The music you've chosen: have you permission to use it? It sounds rather too good to be included for free useage in iMovie or whatever you've used. But even if you have permission to use it copyright-free, the music surely is more relevant to a panoramic scene in a full-blown movie, for instance.

    Not picking you out, yours just happens to be the 6th or 7th game trailer where the music is surely more connected for a movie, and seems to have no points of connection with the gameplay of the game shown.

    I reckon if you found some copyright free jolly pirate music, it'll be more attractive to your potential customers. Just my opinion.

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  • Paul900Paul900 Member Posts: 18
    gyroscope, dude, that is the stupidest thing ive ever heard, well sure it doesnt really go with da game, but it makes the game look better, its called advertising dude
  • gyroscopegyroscope I am here.Member, Sous Chef, PRO Posts: 6,598
    Paul900 said:
    gyroscope, dude, that is the stupidest thing ive ever heard, well sure it doesnt really go with da game, but it makes the game look better, its called advertising dude

    Good advertising to put the wrong type of music to a game trailer? OK, your opinion, Paul.

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  • Paul900Paul900 Member Posts: 18
    what the hell is that meant to be? its an empty page with his contact crud
  • Paul900Paul900 Member Posts: 18
    omg dude you make no sense
  • gyroscopegyroscope I am here.Member, Sous Chef, PRO Posts: 6,598
    Sorry, you talking to me? What the hell is what meant to be?

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  • Paul900Paul900 Member Posts: 18
    dude its just like hungry jacks adds, they make it look all nice and stuff, then u buy it and its all squashed up and half the time missing ingrediants, like i got a cheeseburger with no cheese one time
  • Paul900Paul900 Member Posts: 18
    i mean, the game isnt crud they just make it look better
  • gyroscopegyroscope I am here.Member, Sous Chef, PRO Posts: 6,598
    And that's OK?

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  • Paul900Paul900 Member Posts: 18
    well gyroscope i dont see your game, or your trailer so stfu
  • okkleokkle Member Posts: 32
    Game looks quite good, nice cute and colourful graphics. Though I would agree the music is not fitting, even as a humerous contrast to the cute and cartoony visual. Something more light and jolly would fit better and help bring out the excitement of the game more.
  • Paul900Paul900 Member Posts: 18
    yeah okkle is right, i thought it was gonna be a hell realistic game XD still good though
  • gyroscopegyroscope I am here.Member, Sous Chef, PRO Posts: 6,598
    Paul900 said:
    well gyroscope i dont see your game, or your trailer so stfu

    "stfu" : is that "stuff you"? And I know, I can't show you a game trailer, or even any of my finished games, so you are perfectly correct that I haven't any opinion whatsover about other people's games or trailers, only you have.

    Enjoy your hungry jacks cheeseburger with no cheese. And keep taking your tablets.

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  • AHBGamesAHBGames Member, PRO Posts: 121
    Hey Guys, thanks for your comments ...
  • Paul900Paul900 Member Posts: 18
    wait 1. stfu means Shut the fk up and 2. what tablets?
  • gyroscopegyroscope I am here.Member, Sous Chef, PRO Posts: 6,598
    Paul900 said:
    wait 1. stfu means Shut the fk up ...

    No, I won't. You've got a problem with that?
    Paul900 said:
    ... and 2. what tablets?

    You know, stop playing games.... your medication.

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  • okkleokkle Member Posts: 32
    Paul you are welcome to your opinion obviously, but so is gyroscope and so am I even if those opinions do not match your own.

    Both gyroscope and I are giving our honest opinion, and that is that the music does not fit the trailer.
    If you like it that's fine, you can let AHBGames know without resorting to insulting other members, this is meant to be a helpful community.

    Btw, gyroscope it's worse than that, it's an acronym for 'shut the *expletive* up'. And replying to him is only encouraging him.
  • Paul900Paul900 Member Posts: 18
    no im just saying the music doesnt go with the game, but he only put it there to advertise it and make people want to play it more
  • okkleokkle Member Posts: 32
    Cool, ok, just leave it at that then :)
  • birdboybirdboy Member Posts: 284
    Trailer looks pretty neat, great work AHBGames. I like the artwork. (;
    But for the music i agree with gyroscope, it feels kinda amateurish. Maybe you could add something a bit more pirate-like and not that epic.

    And what the hell is wrong with you Paul900? Who are you to tell someone giving a reasonable critique to stfu?
  • AHBGamesAHBGames Member, PRO Posts: 121
    thanks for your comments ...
  • laytolayto Member Posts: 41
    Good work has been done
  • beefy_clyrobeefy_clyro Member Posts: 5,394
    Graphics look great and game looks fun, congrats.

    Hmmm not sure on Paul, he joined 11 hours ago just to get involved in taking digs at gyro for his opinion .... fishy.

    Also, the game seems too cutesy for that type of music so i do agree it should be more jolly
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