platformer game preview(looking for feedback)

MoebiusMoebius Member Posts: 194
edited April 2012 in Working with GS (Mac)
so i've been working on a platformer game, here is some of the art for the game, the main chracter is still on beta phase, so not color, what do you think?

image

Comments

  • 8BitAvrin8BitAvrin Member, PRO Posts: 368
    I think it looks good. I like the retro art style & the colors. Good job, keep up the progress

    WebsiteTwitter ∞ My apps are available on: Apple iOS App StoreGoogle Play App StoreAmazon App Store

  • UtopianGamesUtopianGames Member Posts: 5,692
    I don't like it tbh somethings not right, i love the retro style it's not that umm let me ask Chris to have a look at it.

    Darren.
  • LeonardDeveloperLeonardDeveloper Member Posts: 4,630
    To characters black and white the worlds colored with bright colors... No color co-ordination... other than that I like it
  • SpriteAttackSpriteAttack Member Posts: 524
    edited April 2012
    Lightbulb - I am sorry... but this is not working on a whole lot of levels. It's inconsistent and looks like you tried to achieve a pixelated effect but failed.

    I can't see the point trying to emulate pixelart when you are clearly using vectors. The little bunch of grass and the grass-line on the ground tiles gives that away - there are no diagonals. It's got to be blocks all the way.

    Another problem is the level of detail in the ground tiles... Is it that important that it needs the highest amount of detail which results in catching the viewers eye.

    Even if you don't stick to the grid of proper pixel just keeping it squares looks a lot more uniform.

    image

    I did a quick revamp of the scene using just boxes and circles with minor modifications to create a more consistent look. I believe that showing things can be more helpful then describing them.

    image


  • UtopianGamesUtopianGames Member Posts: 5,692
    edited April 2012
    One word "WOW"

    Darren.
  • MoebiusMoebius Member Posts: 194
    another proof i need to improve ;), i'll give it a try, i guess i'll be dropping out the pixelated stuff, :P
Sign In or Register to comment.