An english native-speaker can correct this game's description?
gamevicci
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Hi guys, sorry for this post, my english is not very good, so is there someone who can revise this description?
I offer perfect italian translations for your games
"Enter the world of the Stone Wheel!
Roll fast, jump, stay in balance, but most of all use your brain to help
the bee-stone to reach the honey!
Stone Wheel 2 is a puzzle platformer where you must use all your instinct to reach the end of each level, and more again to reach the honey jar!
This is the story of the Guardian Bee, who must wash away the shame to have lost alla the honey of the beehive.
The old wise "Rock" gave you the power to become a stone wheel, and now you can roll fast and get back all the honey stolen by the Big Bear!
FEATURES
➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠
★ 4 WORLDS TO EXPLORE ★
★ 94 EPIC LEVELS ★
★ GAME CENTER AND KIIP ACHIEVEMENTS TO WIN REAL PRIZES ★
★ THE CHANCE TO REDEEM THE HONOUR OF THE GUARDIAN BEE ★
➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠
Search the solution of the game on YouTube, by the most skilled stone wheel player in the world: "Master Maci"
thanks in advance!!
I offer perfect italian translations for your games
"Enter the world of the Stone Wheel!
Roll fast, jump, stay in balance, but most of all use your brain to help
the bee-stone to reach the honey!
Stone Wheel 2 is a puzzle platformer where you must use all your instinct to reach the end of each level, and more again to reach the honey jar!
This is the story of the Guardian Bee, who must wash away the shame to have lost alla the honey of the beehive.
The old wise "Rock" gave you the power to become a stone wheel, and now you can roll fast and get back all the honey stolen by the Big Bear!
FEATURES
➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠
★ 4 WORLDS TO EXPLORE ★
★ 94 EPIC LEVELS ★
★ GAME CENTER AND KIIP ACHIEVEMENTS TO WIN REAL PRIZES ★
★ THE CHANCE TO REDEEM THE HONOUR OF THE GUARDIAN BEE ★
➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠
Search the solution of the game on YouTube, by the most skilled stone wheel player in the world: "Master Maci"
thanks in advance!!
Answers
Roll fast, jump, stay balanced and most of all, use your brain to help the bee-stone reach the lost honey!
Stone Wheel 2 is a puzzle platformer in which you must use all of your instincts to complete the level and reach the honey jar!
This is the story of the Guardian Bee. He must redeem himself after losing all of the beehive's honey. The old, wise Rock gave you the power to become a stone wheel. With this power, you can roll fast and get back all of the honey stolen by the Big Bear!
FEATURES
➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠
★ 4 WORLDS TO EXPLORE ★
★ 94 EPIC LEVELS ★
★ GAME CENTER AND KIIP ACHIEVEMENTS TO WIN REAL PRIZES ★
★ THE CHANCE TO REDEEM THE HONOUR OF THE GUARDIAN BEE ★
➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠➠
If you get stuck, then head on over to YouTube to find the full game walkthrough by "Master Maci".
This seems okay to me, but I'm no Shakespeare.
Ace
I have a problem with the word "instincts" … use all of your skills ???
1.) What's the language called?
2.) Where does that name suggest the language is from?
It's our language... You ruined it haha.
End of argument :P
Ace