Feedback wanted for my new game - 1 preview

patapplepatapple Member Posts: 873
edited April 2012 in Working with GS (Mac)
hi,


I'm working on my new game since a month. This is a simple game similar to "Tap the frog". There are some packs ( in the final release I think they will be 5 or 7) and 10 levels for each pack. the first two packs are very simple but the next are awesome. All the game and the graphics are made by me. I just made a video to show you and to have some feedback. The graphics and the sounds are momentary. The number of star on the menu is wrong because for this video and to show you the letters pack, I need to set the number of stars to 24.



What do you think? any advice is welcome :))

sorry for my english ;)

Comments

  • simo103simo103 Member, PRO Posts: 1,331
    @patapple ... looks great so far. Make sure to ask the forum for help on any of your text so we can help you with the proper english wording (the instructions for example are English words but the phrasing isn't correct). Good luck.
  • JustMe74JustMe74 Member, PRO Posts: 542
    Neat concept, but I have to agree with @simo103 -- there are grammatical errors in the instructions that should be corrected.
  • patapplepatapple Member Posts: 873
    Yes, I know. When I will finish the game I ask here in the forum or I will go to my friends, she is a english teacher here in switzerland.
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