Finished my logo - rate it please!

salah.rahalsalah.rahal Member Posts: 121
edited April 2012 in [$] Art and Sound/Music services
hey guys after i choosed the right name with you guys .. i made this logo
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wich one i should use and is it good or no
and if any one have good ideas pleas let me konw so i change it
wiating for you guys ...

Answers

  • salah.rahalsalah.rahal Member Posts: 121
    http://www.shy22.com/pngfile/fse42186.png
    sorry i repeated the pic
  • StormyStudioStormyStudio United KingdomMember Posts: 3,989
    good name, but not an overly exciting logo....perhaps have some wonder springing out of the box... (recognisable game stuff, i.e. controllers, 8 bit invaders, sound waves, pens, pencils, lights, fireworks, joy!! ).

    The text is nice and legible but could do with a bit more going on... For started perhaps have a larger first letter for each word, also if you want a reflection try flipping the gradient so the reflection is visible from the bottom of the word and fades out as it goes to the top.

    Perhaps have a W on one side of the box and a B on the other, that way you can have a smaller recognisable logo which might be useful for quickly branding your game.

    Or have the word BOX with some 3d depth (to make it a bit more boxy)...

    Just throwing ideas around... but great name and I think a great logo is acheiveable.



  • simo103simo103 Member, PRO Posts: 1,331
    @salah.rahal ... out of the two I like the first one better ... but don't like either that much. Might be worth paying someone to do one for you (at the point you think your brand is going to get noticed). For example they appear to use standard effects but lack the special knowledge that an experience designer would bring. The letters might be closer together in places, the reflection of the letters is different than the reflection of the box. The whole logo is too far left. How would that logo work in non-black backgrounds, on letterhead/business cards etc. Can the 'wonder' be reflected better in the box image?
  • gotyoursgotyours Member Posts: 246
    i would remove the reflection under the text wonder box but keep it under the actual box but cool either way
  • MoonMouseMoonMouse Member Posts: 75
    The box graphic looks good, but I'm not too sure about the font used. It doesn't really capture the essence of "wonder" or excitement. It's a little too tame and a little too gimmicky.

    If you want an exciting "video game feel", I'd try what @stormystudio said - have something popping out of the box.

    If your going for a cleaner, apple-like feel, the box graphic is great - but the font needs to be more subtle.

    Anyway, you've made a valiant effort :) And don't worry, this is all a learning experience!

    All the best,
    MM
  • RPRP Member Posts: 1,990
    edited April 2012
    Where is the wonder? Mystery? Maybe a box seeping with ????? and !!!!

    Possibly something like @StormyStudio and @MoonMouse said, like a Jack in the box approach, with a crooked ? on a spring.
  • ZoytZoyt Member Posts: 374
    What happened with the original logo idea? If your having trouble with it, I know exactly how to do it. This ones simple, but a little too much. The second logo is better but still needs a little work. Here's how: The W on the box needs to be sheeted to look like its on the box. It would also be good to have something coming out of the box.
  • LeonardDeveloperLeonardDeveloper Member Posts: 4,630
    The logo is to... "overcrowded" try and make it simpler ;)
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  • salah.rahalsalah.rahal Member Posts: 121
    http://www.shy22.com/pngfile/7sc67760.png
    chek this its wight edition i think looks better i will try to work on new one like you adviced me
  • LeonardDeveloperLeonardDeveloper Member Posts: 4,630
    That looks like the disney font..
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  • PixelPunPixelPun Member Posts: 324
    @salah.rahal I like making logos and stuff... and I'm really bored today at work so I made this. It always helps me when I can see over versions of a logos and designs. I think when you see someone else's rendition of an idea it can help your creative process!

    Hope this helps!
    Rob
    facebook.com/pixelpun

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  • PixelPunPixelPun Member Posts: 324
    PS. if you want the photoshop file I can email it to you... just let me know!
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  • salah.rahalsalah.rahal Member Posts: 121
    tkx guys for your nice ideas ... i will try to make a better
    and if not i will make someone work one it and pay for it

    good luck to you all with your game
  • debugdesigndebugdesign Member Posts: 886
    Why not use the mystery box image from mario games... then put the company name in the orange.

    I used one on my site and it pretty recognizable and shows you as a game company.

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    *this offer is not on at the moment and this is image is only being used for illustrative purposes.
  • debugdesigndebugdesign Member Posts: 886
    If you want me to do one for you - let me know what your budget is :)
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