Looks fine, but when making a public website, you really need to check your spelling/grammar. Particularly in areas you feel are especially important, such as where you say "But most of all I love severing God". It may be prudent to have a parent proof read your site before you make updates, that way it is not a distraction from the rest of the site. Otherwise, looks clean and streamlined.
Looks fine, but when making a public website, you really need to check your spelling/grammar. Particularly in areas you feel are especially important, such as where you say "But most of all I love severing God". It may be prudent to have a parent proof read your site before you make updates, that way it is not a distraction from the rest of the site. Otherwise, looks clean and streamlined.
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