Any thoughts about my kickstarter page?

farhanuk77@me.comfarhanuk77@me.com Member Posts: 4
edited April 2013 in Business and Marketing Theory
Hello everyone,
I have created a kickstarter page for my upcoming game Heroes,Inc. hoping to get a funding goal. Any feedback would be appreciated. Thanks

Visit: http://kck.st/171vg46

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  • iamcarteziamcartez Houston, TexasMember Posts: 648
    Looks pretty cool to me!

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  • IcedBIcedB Member, PRO Posts: 384
    I'd redo the pitch, its quite choppy and could be more to the point, also doesn't show enough gameplay, just cut any of the crazy stuff out too, watch other peoples pitches and see how calm and straight to the point they are
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  • UtopianGamesUtopianGames Member Posts: 5,692
    I think you need to show the game in action even if it's just a quick snippet.

    Also not sure why you need to hire "developers" one or you would be enough for this game?

    Best of luck raising the money.

    I like the idea of chasing a villain but it would also be cool (imo) if the villain had a super power he could use at random mb once per level and the tables were turned for a few seconds to mix it up a little, maybe he could turn into a big monster and start chasing you and the scene scrolling goes from left to right to right to left....just an idea and me thinking out loud.

    Darren.
  • farhanuk77@me.comfarhanuk77@me.com Member Posts: 4
    Thanks so much for the feedback guys
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