System dynamic help to understand the strategy of the game

Axygames

I want to understand if the instructions are sufficient, I would like opinions and advice
http://itunes.apple.com/us/app/doctor-twist-lite/id642184454?mt=8

tatiang

I'm not sure why you posted this. Are you just giving an example of your help screen or is there something you wanted assistance with?

Axygames

@tatiang
I want to understand if the instructions are sufficient, I would like opinions and advice

tatiang

I can tell you I don't understand it. It might be better to have several small equations such as:



...along with text "Give medicine to cure bacteria" or whatever.

Also, "DNA of the cell altered, treats with the pill" isn't really a sentence. Should it be "The pill treats altered cell DNA"? Or "Altered cell DNA is treated with a pill" or...?

Axygames

@tatiang
The equation is a good idea. I work now, thanks

zzap64

I love Doctor twist as it hurts my brain

As Tatiang suggests, less text is good and focus a little more on pictorial references is a win.
Plus, with the amount of colors seen through the opacity windows makes the text a little hard to read & take in. Double brainy hurtseese.

Good luck my Doctor Twist creator....forward on

Axygames

@zzap64 @tatiang
your help is essential, this is my first original game, thanks.

tatiang

If you need more than that screen edited, you might consider my services: https://forums.gamesalad.com/discussion/53274/proofreader-available

Axygames

@tatiang
thank you, I believe that your services will be very useful.
I have to correct the spoken messages during the game.

Axygames

Axygames

@tatiang @zzap64 @gyroscope

tatiang

Yes! Much better.

zzap64

Great. Now do you actually teach the player the aim of the game? Plus the basic fundamentals of the gameplay ?

Axygames

@zzap64
Yes, in the first level I added a tutor, watch the video.