logo's I made :) if you want one please PM me... ^^ (tell me what you think please)

-Timo-

hey guys
I just started making logo's and I want to hear what you think... ^^
here are some examples





if you want me to make one for you can PM me

please leave a comment with what you think (like and dislikes)
thanks

-Timo-

-Timo-

new cool Neon Light



tell me what you think
would be really appreciated
thanks

Armelline

Hey! Looks like you've made a great start. I'm certainly no graphic designer, so take anything I say with a pinch of salt!

I'd suggest that they're a bit "busy". A logo should ideally be simple and striking. If you think about all the "guess the logo" games, how the logos featured are so recognisable even with the words taken out. I'd recommend trying to simplify them down a bit.

Keep at it though!

-Timo-

thanks for you comment @armelline
I think you made a good point there... they are a bit busy ^^
so maybe the word logo is not the good word xD
thanks for the tip I will try to work on it

KevinCross

The Neon Light one would make a good background for a game or maybe just a menu, you might need to tone down the light/glow though, and maybe create breaks in the lines as neon lights aren't normally joined in one continuous line. One of the themes I'm toying with in the project I'm working on is the 1920's/30's where neon lights were becoming popular so they might make it into the mix

Good work and keep at it

-Timo-

thanks for you comment @KevinCross
I know what you mean and I tried to fix that but I couldn't find how...
thanks for the tip though

it's a good idea to use this for a menu/background
thanks

KillerPenguinStudios

The first 2 are quite interesting but I think there is a little too much going on making them really busy and it kind of takes away from the name. I liked the last two. Need a little tweaking but over all looking good! Keep it up and keep practicing!

-Timo-

thanks for your comment @killerpenguins
I think you are right... they are too busy but I didn't spend a lot of time with it so I still can change that ^^ (not sure how xD)
I will try that later
first I will try to make a mirage text effect
thanks

VolontaArts

Nice work! but yea i thought the same thing. though they are cool looking! its a little to much the first 2. A great start and i know you were just having fun with it!. the other 2 are awesome and are on the right track.. only thing i see i would change is for the neon light one i would tighten the words up to be really close together. just because logos are usually really tight lol.

-Timo-

Thanks for your comment @redeyearts
Thanks for the tip, i will Put the words closer to eachother
Thanks!

-Timo-

new cool logo
*Updated*

-Timo-

new cool rainbow colored logo

which one is nicer?

1: *Lose*

2: *Win*


which one is nicer?

Dues

Definetly #2

-Timo-

I really don't know what this is but it has something cool... xD

-Timo-

@Dues thanks for your comment and you opinion
do you like all of the 'logo's'? ^^

Dues

I think you should focus on not having to much "noise" in your logos.
A logo should be striking and easy to read. Keep practice and you will get there

Gamepenciler

Yeah T kind of agree with the rest of the crew. I like the first two 3D type images.. The next series of logos are quite noisy that it's hard to read the text.

-Timo-

@Dues thanks really appreciate your comment

here is another one...

-Timo-

@ecanhoj thanks for you comment I'm trying to make the word easier to read

-Timo-

the ones with *updated* above the image are Updated and in my opinion easier to read ^^

-Timo-

I don't think I am on the right track... xD

VGX

I'm no expert but try to focus more on the text than anything else. You want the text to stand out

-Timo-

@VeiraGames thanks for your comment and your tip.
you are no expert? you are THE expert!
I really try to let the text stand out but yeah... it's not really working but I am working on it ^^ thanks

VolontaArts

if you are aiming for game start menu screens...then you are right on the money! lol theres a lot of background in those! so great

but if u want logos like what @veiragames meant is theres more things you can do to the text then, drop shadow, bevel emboss, outer glow.... actually... try a logo without a background so you can focus more on text/Logo keep this one simple but unique. i bet its would look great because u have the skills

-Timo-

@RedeyeArts I am 15 years on this is just a hobby (just like gamesalad) and I am not looking straight for the money ^^ but when I can earn some money that would be cool of course thanks

thanks for the tip and thats exactly what I am going to do next, thanks
thank you for the compliment really appreciate it

VolontaArts

@timolapre1998 no, "right on the money" is a saying that means your right on track lol. but wow your doing great for being 15! do you watch youtube videos? so helpful too

-Timo-

@RedeyeArts oh LOL I am not english (from the netherlands), haha xD
yes I watch youtube videos (some of these logos are tutorials...) thanks for the tip

LumpApps

Nice Timo. What program do you use? I am a Photoshop and Illustrator Guru so if you need help ask

-Timo-

@Ludwigheijden thanks
I am using adobe photoshop CS6. ok haha I will ask if I need help, thanks

-Timo-

I just made 2 logo's for Bjandthekatz Studios.
here they are

KevinCross

I agree with others here, try and create logos without backgrounds. They're quite noisy. The first bjandkatz logo might look a lot better on a white background.

Keep in mind that when you do create them for people they're not going to want a background on them at all. Most will want a transparent background so that they can place them on their splash screens or websites etc.