Game Design Class Game

PHS26PHS26 Member, PRO Posts: 3

Me & my friend made a zombie game for our class. We would appreciate any feedback on our first game.
http://tgolinar27.itch.io/bjork-zombie-survival

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  • tatiangtatiang Member, Sous Chef, PRO, Senior Sous-Chef Posts: 11,949

    When asking for feedback, it's a good idea to provide some context (e.g. "It's only one level and there are glitches when you..." or "The artwork is just a placeholder" or "It's not possible to pass level one but what do you think of the jumping height?").

    Here are some critical comments to help you improve the game:

    1. On the intro scene, don't have the words over the buttons. It's hard to read and doesn't look good.
    2. On the controls scene, use correct grammar instead of a run-on sentence.
    3. Give the player a starting weapon so we don't have to change it immediately.
    4. Every time I play, I get pushed into the large zombie (?) actor and can't move or shoot the zombie next to me. I then have to restart the game.
    5. What is "Bjork?"
    6. Why the odd credits screen at the end?
    7. Losing and then restarting doesn't work. It just takes me back to the credits screen again.

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  • GnarlyGnarly canadaMember Posts: 840

    Potential.

    Agree. Just place lettering under the icon buttons.

    Im just pushed over to the right zombie guy and there is no game play.

    I like the look of it.

  • PHS26PHS26 Member, PRO Posts: 3

    @tatiang Bjork is the character. We may have uploaded the wrong save of the game where we messed with our friends, and may upload a new save soon with fixes. Thank you for the feedback.

  • PHS26PHS26 Member, PRO Posts: 3

    @gattoman Thank you for the feedback

  • tatiangtatiang Member, Sous Chef, PRO, Senior Sous-Chef Posts: 11,949

    Ah, okay. I thought maybe it was Icelandic for "Health." ;)

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