Luna 2d/puzzle platformer progress

Icebox

I decided to make a platformer I started two days ago , I dont know the story yet ! But here is a little video for game play , I still didnt add puzzles or anything and im learning how to draw better in flash , give me your opinion please , thanks !

owen_dennis

It certainly looks good, but I would start figuring out that story as soon as you can. It's weird to kill those deer. The game feels so peaceful, so why would this character kill those deer? I immediately felt bad about it as soon as I saw it. I you wanted to do that, you could figure out a game where over the course of the game your character slowly becomes more evil. Like maybe in the beginning the deer are your friends but you get infected with an evil spirit and then you find you have to kill them near the end. That would make the player feel pretty terrible (in a good way) if done right.

KevinCross

Not a massive fan of platformers, but what you've achieved in two days is pretty awesome!

Icebox

@owen_dennis thank you for your review , the deer doesnt hurt you i just put them there for fun , I'll try to come up with a story soon but I was just testing !

@KevinCross Thanks alot !

jamie_c

Very impressive for two days of work. Looks great so far.

Icebox

@jamie_c thanks alot im glad you like it

jay2dx

Looks great!

Socks

Looks really nice, love the little details like the weight of the player pushing the boat lower into the water, very nice !

I'd add a little sway to the boat as it moves through the water, a little [2 *sin(self.time *120)] . . . .

BigDave

great atmosphere

@Socks
this made me lol

"I'd add a little [2 *sin(self.time *120)] "

Mr. Martens

Could the guy in the boat use a pole to advance the boat for you?

Braydon_SFX

Very cool! Great work in only 2 days!