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House of Horror - Introduction - Please feedback

CodeCodeCodeCode Posts: 200Member
Hello everyone, so finally the introduction of my new game House of horror (provisional name) is done, i showed some time ago a very very small demo of it.
I would like to have your thoughts about it so i can have some feedback

so before u play it i would like to make some comments.
The final version will have music and sounds.
I will add more stuff to the final scenes so they look better.
My english is horrible, beaver i release the game i will improve all the texts with someones help who really can write good texts.
Thats no the final start screen, its just for the introduction demo.

So here is the link.
http://gamesalad.com/game/41888

By the way i am looking for a new name for the game, if u have some ideas let me know^^

Thx for all the feedback.

Comments

  • DigiChainDigiChain Posts: 1,214Member, PRO
    Ok I'll feedback.

    Overall - I really like it. I love the retro adventure game look to it. Sound and music will really bring it to life.

    Yeah - there are a couple of errors in your text so you'll need to get someone to proof read it.

    Also, having to click on the text to advance isn't obvious. I'd at least put a 'Next' type arrow, or some simple animated symbol so you know you need to click there.

    But, overall I do really like it!
  • CodeCodeCodeCode Posts: 200Member
    THank you for your feedback Digi-chain =D
    Yeah thats a good point with the text, i will work on it to make obvious how to advance.

    Thx again^^
  • JohnPapiomitisJohnPapiomitis Posts: 6,256Member
    i agree with digi-chain took me a minute to realize to click the text. Other then that your off to a great start and cant wait to see more!
  • quantumsheepquantumsheep Posts: 8,188Member
    JohnPapiomitis said:
    i agree with digi-chain took me a minute to realize to click the text. Other then that your off to a great start and cant wait to see more!

    Yep, that was the biggest issue for me too!

    But it's coming along very nicely.

    The English in these kinds of games (if that's your key language you're aiming at) has to be perfect.

    People that generally play adventure games do so because they enjoy reading. They wouldn't enjoy it so much if it was grammatically incorrect, or just didn't make sense.

    Great stuff though! Looking forward to it!

    QS :D

    Dr. Sam Beckett never returned home...
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  • CodeCodeCodeCode Posts: 200Member
    Thank you guys, i will look for someone who correct all the texts. :-)
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