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Rate my New Graphic and Drawing Skills

Do you like my new graphic for my airplane game? Rate it on a scale of 1 to 10 and give me a suggestion if you have one.
http://i.imgur.com/4V2Ie.png

Comments

  • VolontaArtsVolontaArts Posts: 510Member
    looks great! could use some darker eyes though!
  • Mpaula620 said:

    looks great! could use some darker eyes though!

    Thanks

  • TheGabfatherTheGabfather Posts: 633Member
    Hey good job! Just a few suggestions towards improvement:
    1. More itty-bitty details here and there
    2. Well-placed shadows and reflections make huge differences, even in 2D art
    3. Maybe adjust the clothing's grip on his body (unless loose is really the style for this piece)
    4. I look at the "hose" and my imagination gets the better of me X_X

    Over-all good job, and make sure to always work with vectors! :)

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  • Jsn95Jsn95 Posts: 6Member
    +1 on the darker eyes, maybe a little more face detail, shading here and there... But looking very good! :)
  • HappyBadgersHappyBadgers Posts: 53Member
    I'm seeing some "crunchiness" around the edges of things. What drawing tool are you using?
  • Hey good job! Just a few suggestions towards improvement:
    1. More itty-bitty details here and there
    2. Well-placed shadows and reflections make huge differences, even in 2D art
    3. Maybe adjust the clothing's grip on his body (unless loose is really the style for this piece)
    4. I look at the "hose" and my imagination gets the better of me X_X

    Over-all good job, and make sure to always work with vectors! :)

    OMG the hose the hose...it has to go...LOL it can really mess with one's imagination as @TheGabfather said

    You sick minded people! Can you think of anyway I can remove this flaw without loosing the hose? It is a major part of the character, without it he looks like Darth Vader.

    I'm seeing some "crunchiness" around the edges of things. What drawing tool are you using?

    I am using gimp to draw, it looks crunchy, but when it is shrunk in gamesalad in looks fine.
  • jamie_cjamie_c ImagineLabs.rocks Posts: 5,577Member, BASIC
    For the hose maybe add and extra curve so it doesn't look like it coming straight up from below and take off or change the line (crown) at the tip top that makes it look like... well you know.

    :)
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