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New illustrated character what do you think ?

Its almost outlined , so it wont be long till i am coloring it , but i am just wondering what people think ?

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  • JordeyyJordeyy Posts: 409Member
    Sorry for posting 2 of the same post , i just put it in the wrong section
  • SnapFireStudiosSnapFireStudios Posts: 1,603Member
    It looks good, but please keep all of your artwork in one thread. :)
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  • JordeyyJordeyy Posts: 409Member
    @snapfirestudios do you think it would be a good game character ?
  • SnapFireStudiosSnapFireStudios Posts: 1,603Member
    Sure, but I'm actually looking at it again... where are the eyes? Are there none?
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  • JordeyyJordeyy Posts: 409Member
    @snapfirestudios i havnt put any , i think it looks nice how it is , but do you think it needs eyes?
  • JordeyyJordeyy Posts: 409Member
    edited April 2013
    @jarrenh im glad you noticed , i didnt say anything to see if people noticed what it was and you did :) :)
  • BazookaTimeBazookaTime Posts: 1,274Member
    I like it.
  • JordeyyJordeyy Posts: 409Member

    I like it.

    Thanks bro :)

  • SnapFireStudiosSnapFireStudios Posts: 1,603Member
    Ah yes, I see the "eyes" now. Looks good.
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  • JordeyyJordeyy Posts: 409Member

    Ah yes, I see the "eyes" now. Looks good.
    - Thomas

    If i paint it to the same standard do you think i will be good enough for peolle to hire ?
  • gyroscopegyroscope I am here.Posts: 6,577Member, Sous Chef, PRO
    edited April 2013

    You did this, @Jordeyy? I think it's to a professional level, definitely (although needs some tweaking, as well as the colour put on as you want). And if you can keep this quality consistently, you're good enough for people to hire you, I'd say.

    Here's my constructive crits/suggestions:

    • Where the point of the beard overlaps the thumb, I'd make that beard end shorter so it doesn't overlap (when the image is smaller this'll be clearer at that point)

    • The horn: don't know if it's meant to be one horn only or two horns.... so if one horn, I'd move it over to the centre of the head costume more; if it's two, then add the other one the other side (you'd see a bit of it)

    • The crown seems like it's not finished with comparison with the rest of the drawing (the line style is different than the rest, thin for a start)

    • An excellent style of linework but will only work if this particular illustration was shown this size or not much smaller.... if it was reduced a lot, that style of inner line "emphasis" will be wasted

    Hope those points are helpful; look forward to any corrections + colour. :-)

    ""You are in a maze of twisty passages, all alike." - Zork        temp domain http://spidergriffin.wix.com/alphaghostapps

  • DanjinkiesDanjinkies Posts: 13Member, PRO
    The line art looks great. I'm looking forward to seeing the colored version.
  • JordeyyJordeyy Posts: 409Member
    @gyroscope

    what do you think now ?
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  • gyroscopegyroscope I am here.Posts: 6,577Member, Sous Chef, PRO
    edited April 2013

    Hey, he's got feet! :-) Seriously, I like that a lot, @Jordeyy, in fact I'd say it's impressive; really well done. Very much looking forward to the coloured version now. :-)

    ""You are in a maze of twisty passages, all alike." - Zork        temp domain http://spidergriffin.wix.com/alphaghostapps

  • JordeyyJordeyy Posts: 409Member
    gyroscope said:


    Hey, he's got feet! :-) Seriously, I like that a lot, @Jordeyy, in fact I'd say it's impressive; really well done. Very much looking forward to the coloured version now. :-)

    This is the color so far

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  • SnapFireStudiosSnapFireStudios Posts: 1,603Member
    @Jordeyy - Looks awesome!
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  • JordeyyJordeyy Posts: 409Member
    this is as much as im going to do tonight but its coming along nice




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  • JarrenHJarrenH Posts: 206Member
    Awesome! Now you need to rig it with some animation software! Is this just fun art, or is there a game idea behind it?
  • JordeyyJordeyy Posts: 409Member
    JarrenH said:

    Awesome! Now you need to rig it with some animation software! Is this just fun art, or is there a game idea behind it?

    It started as fun art but it seems sad to not use it to be fair , i dont know much about animation though ?
  • BazookaTimeBazookaTime Posts: 1,274Member
    That is a cool character, really unique. This guy needs to be in a game:-)
  • PBEmpirePBEmpire Posts: 676Member
    you seem to be talented in this. Great work
  • DalleZDalleZ Posts: 85Member
    Did you use a tablet for this ? @Jordeyy
  • JordeyyJordeyy Posts: 409Member
    DalleZ said:

    Did you use a tablet for this ? @Jordeyy

    No i didnt , i have got a tablet though
  • JordeyyJordeyy Posts: 409Member
    this is how im getting on :)

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    tell me what you think ?
  • JordeyyJordeyy Posts: 409Member
    Do you think any colors need changing
  • POMPOM Posts: 2,599Member
    Try red for the fur maybe?!

    Roy.
  • gyroscopegyroscope I am here.Posts: 6,577Member, Sous Chef, PRO
    edited April 2013

    I'd agree with Roy there; dark red fur might work well... maybe make the horn orange... coming along great. :-)

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  • JordeyyJordeyy Posts: 409Member
    @POM what about his hands and feet ?
  • JordeyyJordeyy Posts: 409Member
    @gyroscope what about his hands and feet ?
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