How was my game?

SLOCM3ZSLOCM3Z Member Posts: 797

Hello all,

About two weeks ago I posted my first game called Flag Battles. I didn't get much feed back which gave me concerns. If you played it could you tell me what you liked or didn't like? Here is the discussion if you would like to try it. Link's near bottom http://forums.gamesalad.com/discussion/74627/my-first-game#latest

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  • GnarlyGnarly canadaMember Posts: 840

    Just repost link here instead of making people go through old posts
    thanks.

  • GnarlyGnarly canadaMember Posts: 840

    http://gsrca.de/132589

    here is link

  • The_Gamesalad_GuruThe_Gamesalad_Guru Member Posts: 9,922
    edited August 2015

    I've been around here a long time. When people don't post it means they don't have any positive feedback for you. Many get slammed for negative feedback which is a shame when you want an honest opinion around here.

    I didn't play it but from the shots I would say you definitely need a graphics upgrade. It's a long process to becoming a polished developer so keep at it!

  • AngryBoiAngryBoi Member Posts: 586

    @Lost_Oasis_Games said:
    I didn't play it but from the shots I would say you definitely need a graphics upgrade. It's a long process to becoming a polished developer so keep at it!

    Yep

  • GnarlyGnarly canadaMember Posts: 840

    OK......
    I don't get the second scene? Is it a level menu?
    Why are enemies numbered 1?
    What happens when I run out of bullets? I just die?
    Don't like your key selection. Why not just use arrows? Current keys are awkward.

    I think graphics are okay. I would focus on gameplay. I like the player. I think he's cool!!! Shooting is good.

  • hzappshzapps Member, PRO Posts: 173

    @gattoman said:
    OK......
    I don't get the second scene? Is it a level menu?
    Why are enemies numbered 1?
    What happens when I run out of bullets? I just die?
    Don't like your key selection. Why not just use arrows? Current keys are awkward.

    I think graphics are okay. I would focus on gameplay. I like the player. I think he's cool!!! Shooting is good.

    Agree with gattoman, adding that I initially was very very confused with what to do or what was the point? Step back and open the game like you had never played it. Then make tweaks to gameplay based upon those observations

  • GnarlyGnarly canadaMember Posts: 840

    I think theres a cool little game in there...... Don't give up!

    The game is a bit confusing.

    I like the light effect on the pole at the start. No idea what it is but it looks cool.

    Should be a little more clear what we are to do. And more importantly WHY?

    I love your little player guy. Give him a name and a clear mission...

    great start.

  • SLOCM3ZSLOCM3Z Member Posts: 797

    Thanks for the honest responses. Will work on it some more.

  • SLOCM3ZSLOCM3Z Member Posts: 797

    What pole are you talking about, @gattoman?

  • SLOCM3ZSLOCM3Z Member Posts: 797

    I didn't play it but from the shots I would say you definitely need a graphics upgrade. It's a long process to becoming a polished developer so keep at it!

    Yes and I did upgrade the graphics. And I was going for a retro-ish feel.

  • SLOCM3ZSLOCM3Z Member Posts: 797

    @gattoman said:
    Just repost link here instead of making people go through old posts
    thanks.

    I'm sorry. I just didn't want to get in trouble for "Announcing my game" in another post

  • SLOCM3ZSLOCM3Z Member Posts: 797
    edited August 2015

    How does this look @Lost_Oasis_Games ?

  • GnarlyGnarly canadaMember Posts: 840

    @jdlcrater said:
    What pole are you talking about, gattoman?

    At the start of game. Things moving up and down.

  • SLOCM3ZSLOCM3Z Member Posts: 797
    edited August 2015

    It must not unload properly on your browser

  • SLOCM3ZSLOCM3Z Member Posts: 797

    Because I have the meteor spawners moving up and down

  • SLOCM3ZSLOCM3Z Member Posts: 797

    It might be the meteors that are supposed to have a rocky image

  • RCT_GamesRCT_Games Member, PRO Posts: 97

    @jdlcrater Should add a bar at the top of the screen or maybe change the color so your health and objectives are a little easer to read. Right now it gets a little lost.

    Other then that starting to look great!

  • SLOCM3ZSLOCM3Z Member Posts: 797

    Thanks @RCT_Games. I noticed that and will work on it. I think it would be cool if GS added an invert text color from background color. That would be awesome

  • RCT_GamesRCT_Games Member, PRO Posts: 97

    @jdlcrater Yeah that would be a cool feature, could see peoples eyes freaking out on a bonus level or something lol.

  • andrewm2211andrewm2211 Member Posts: 341

    Yeah, your graphics are retro. And the character and plants have an interesting look. But the backgrounds need more than just solid colors. You have to put gradients and texure in them.
    Check out the dirt in the background here. it's got a lot of texture instead of just being brown.

    http://www.arcade-museum.com/images/118/1181242103247.png

  • The_Gamesalad_GuruThe_Gamesalad_Guru Member Posts: 9,922
    edited August 2015

    @andrewm2211 said:
    Yeah, your graphics are retro. And the character and plants have an interesting look. But the backgrounds need more than just solid colors. You have to put gradients and texure in them.
    Check out the dirt in the background here. it's got a lot of texture instead of just being brown.

    http://www.arcade-museum.com/images/118/1181242103247.png

    +1

    I would also scale down the font size it's distracting. Maybe go with life icons instead of text.

  • SLOCM3ZSLOCM3Z Member Posts: 797

    @Lost_Oasis_Games said:
    I would also scale down the font size it's distracting. Maybe go with life icons instead of text.

    Yes. But in the end you can get up to 20 health. Maybe I could just make it red squares?

  • SLOCM3ZSLOCM3Z Member Posts: 797
    edited August 2015

    Or a tiled image that changes its size! @Lost_Oasis_Games thanks!

  • The_Gamesalad_GuruThe_Gamesalad_Guru Member Posts: 9,922

    Is it health or lives? If it's health you can do a bar. If lives just make the fonts smaller.

  • SLOCM3ZSLOCM3Z Member Posts: 797

    It is just health @Lost_Oasis_Games

  • The_Gamesalad_GuruThe_Gamesalad_Guru Member Posts: 9,922

    Do a health bar then that will simplify it. There is a good video on that over at GSHelper.

  • SLOCM3ZSLOCM3Z Member Posts: 797

    Cool. Thanks

  • SLOCM3ZSLOCM3Z Member Posts: 797

    @Lost_Oasis_Games said:
    Do a health bar then that will simplify it. There is a good video on that over at GSHelper.

    Okay @Lost_Oasis_Games. How does the health bar look? Can you understand how much health I would have right there?

  • SLOCM3ZSLOCM3Z Member Posts: 797

    @Lost_Oasis_Games said:
    My guess is five.

    Sweet! Yes.

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